It seems to touch all the points that are necessary, like somebody else said.
My only complaint would be that the word "probably" is used in places where it shouldn't.
When discussing discrimination due to race, he says "but also probably illegal."
And when he mentioned there are 400 American Indian students, he says "probably proportionately more than any institution of higher education in the United States."
These things should have been further researched. Get a lawyer to find out if it truly is illegal and find out if it is the highest proportion or maybe just "nearly" the highest, proportionately.