Any time I read a Wellens article it makes me thankful for Schloss.
https://www.therinklive.com/mens-division-1/nchc/umd-mens-hockey-bulldogs-land-usa-hockey-ntdp-center-cole-spicer-for-2022-23-season
Seriously, the lede starts off with a sentence that an editor would rewrite:
"
The Grand Forks native was originally committed to North Dakota, having already signed an NLI.
"
The was serves no purpose, there's passive voice, and he assumes the audience knows what an NLI is.
The quote he pulled from Spicer is garbage too. Then he randomly inserts a tweet that he doesn't even address.